ANC Passage Master 12/1
One of the passages that i chose from the story is on pages 4 and 5 they decribe all of the members of the Finney family. This is helpful because it allows you to know a little bit about all of the charcters, even though the book is, in first person, told from Mary Lou’s piont of view. Another passage that I thought was interesting was when the dad Sam Finney, brakes the news to the family that their cousin Carl Ray is coming to live with them (pgs.11-13). I thought this passage was interesting because once he had announced the big news Mary Lou’s mom was very upset. That tells the reader that the mom doesn’t want to have another person in the house.
December 1st, 2006 at 8:10 pm
The passages you chose and the reasons that you give for sharing them are very good. You picked two passages that are very important to the story. However, you should have separated the post into two paragraphs. Also - you have numerous spelling and punctuation errors.
December 2nd, 2006 at 1:00 am
I am so impressed that your teacher has you blogging your responses to your reading. I think you did a good job of analyzing the passages you chose. I did see a few spelling errors that you might want to correct.
December 4th, 2006 at 12:16 pm
I think that you explain the paragraph very well. You picked a good paragraph to explain because those where very important paraghraphs that people would need to know if they did not read the book and would want to know a little about the book.